Can't believe it's over, it ended just like that
Now in my room, on my bed is where I sat
Shocked about what happened, I didn't even cry
It hurts so much I am numb, My tears are dried
Where'd the tears go? They're flooding me inside...
I faked a smile, this pain I'll hide...
About Me
- Pakou Lee
- My name is Pakou Lee. I am a Junior at Champlin Park High School. I am 16 years old. I love writing and I also love music. I rap. I sing. I dance. I play the piano. I'm okay with percussion. And I want to learn how to play the guitar. I used to breakdance. :)
7 comments:
i need to use the bathroom....
how do you put a picture in your profile thingy!
I like this story a lot it has a lot of emotion :)
haha I love your other comments.. but anyways I really like your short story!
wow you really worked this break-up scene! oh wow- that sounds like something from the eighties... lol but nah it's really good and i agree nice idea writing it like a poem :)
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