Monday, October 13, 2008

Poem

Daddy packed his bags
as Mommy yelled for him to leave
I lay on the floor
my daddy's leg, I hold on tight
I tried my best to stop him
I'll do anything to keep him here
Mommy pulls me away
and now Daddy walks right out the door
Mom wiped away the tears on my face
and said I'm a big girl now
So since that day on
a daddy, I didn't have

3 comments:

kazia said...

nice poetry, i like it!

Little Miss Diabetic said...

i know how this feels but i know you can show us more..its amazing

Pakou Lee said...

Where do commas and periods go? :0